Great story line There are a few gaps I didnt understand。 Unsure if its because the writer is making another book。 But all round it was a good book。 I love when people write rejection books。 And this had a great story line
mary clarke,
Interesting readThe storyline behind the book was a good one, once i started reading it I couldn't put down。 The only reason I didn't put 5 stars was the fact of grammar problems making it a slightly but harder to read at times。 Other than that a very good read Interesting readThe storyline behind the book was a good one, once i started reading it I couldn't put down。 The only reason I didn't put 5 stars was the fact of grammar problems making it a slightly but harder to read at times。 Other than that a very good read 。。。more
Jean,
“Okay” bookThis book has a decent story line。 BUT it really needs to be edited。 There are sentences that just don’t make sense。
Alyssa,
Liked the ideaI enjoyed the concept of the story。 Who hasn't felt like that。 The edits need to be looked at again。 Liked the ideaI enjoyed the concept of the story。 Who hasn't felt like that。 The edits need to be looked at again。 。。。more
Amanda Board,
Good tryThe plot was ok。 It feels scattered if that makes sense。 Tons of switch backs and details which make it seem not irreverent to the story。 He is always mad。。 she gets captured which seriously adds nothing ro the plot。。 kidnapping and torture and then its like, " oh we found you,, now you're in the hospital, want some soup?" That is how you feel it transitions。Tons of grammatical errors which can make reading annoying。 Like a 1/5 for steam。 I dunno。 Good tryThe plot was ok。 It feels scattered if that makes sense。 Tons of switch backs and details which make it seem not irreverent to the story。 He is always mad。。 she gets captured which seriously adds nothing ro the plot。。 kidnapping and torture and then its like, " oh we found you,, now you're in the hospital, want some soup?" That is how you feel it transitions。Tons of grammatical errors which can make reading annoying。 Like a 1/5 for steam。 I dunno。 。。。more
Tammy Garber,
Spelling mistakesThis was a good story。 However there were so many spelling mistakes and external words added and missing words it was hard to read。